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she was my lunar girl.
because she controlled my moods like the tide,
             and how do you cage a moonbeam?

and she was my sunshine girl.
because she was the center of my orbit,
             and nothing shone as brightly as her smile.

and she was my star girl,
because of course there were other girls but none quite like her,
             and we were separated by a million miles.

but what do you say when they ask how it feels to lose everything?
when your only star goes supernova?
we too are made of stardust.


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are the last lines distracting? or do they fit the entire thing together?
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